Wednesday, August 22, 2012

WriteOnCon Recap!




This month has been CRAZY, but I thought I'd take a moment to do a post about what I learned from WriteOnCon (WOC)!

I'm sure most of you have heard about WOC, but if you haven't, it's an annual writers' conference that takes place online. There's a forum where people post synopses, chapters, and query letters for critique from fellow authors (and ninja agents!), as well as events and contests hosted by editors and other industry experts. There's also a blog with helpful tips on everything from marketing and finding a critique group to the writing process itself.

It's nice that everything is virtual, especially if you're like me and don't have time to fly to conferences around the country. (Next year, though, I'm planning on attending one in person! Maybe two!)

I didn't take advantage of all the WOC offerings, but I did put PPP's query letter up for critique. It was terrifying. I'm shy about sharing too much about my novels - whether it's on the internet or in real life - so this was a couple dozen steps out of my comfort zone... but I am so, SO glad I did it.

Everyone was extremely kind. Even if they had criticism, they always mentioned what they did like about the query. Most liked my title and premise, but wanted the punchline to be punchier. Some didn't like my word choices, but enjoyed the little blurb I had about myself and my experience. Some suggested that I mention Maud (Noelle's trainer) in addition to Noelle herself and her enemy, Jessica, while others preferred the spotlight on Noelle. And I had two people tell me that my letter was one of their favorites at WOC! One sweet gentleman (who admitted that my genre is decidedly NOT his cup of tea) said the query made him want to read the book regardless. Talk about a self-esteem boost, huh?

Even though I felt fairly confident about my query letter already, I'm even more so now that it has been expanded and polished. When you read a book jacket, the description is supposed to entice you to buy. A query letter is meant to do the same thing. Mine was much too sparse and vague before, and now it's a little bit juicier and - hopefully - more exciting.

Unfortunately, I didn't get any comments from ninja agents, which could mean that 1) the query is in good shape and the help I've gotten so far is enough, 2) they didn't like it enough to make a request, or 3) both 1 and 2. Or none of those. BUT, it was very, very exciting to see ninja agents visiting friends' queries!

I also participated in the Twitter-sized pitch event hosted by the editors of Entangled Publishing, who were extremely nice and knowledgeable. Writers submitted story pitches of 140 characters or less. There were over 150 entries, and mine was one of the lucky 50 that got selected for critique!

Alycia Tornetta was the editor who looked at mine, and she very kindly praised the title, pitch, and premise, which made me happy! No criticism either! Again, no request, but I'm feeling optimistic and positive about my story.

It sounds like PPP has the potential to appeal to readers, BUT I just need to find an agent (or editor!) who feels the same way :)

Again, I HIGHLY recommend this conference to anyone who lacks the time and/or money (don't we all?) to attend gatherings around the country. Although those should definitely be a priority one day, WOC is the next best thing. You're getting immediate feedback and exposure, and it's a good way to test the waters before querying OR just to improve your craft. AND it's all free.

When you have a moment, check out the blog or the forums. They are still up and you can glean some great advice and information.

I had a great time and would do this again in a heartbeat. Maybe next year, ELEGY will be up on the chopping block :)

Did you participate? What was your experience like? If not, are you thinking about doing something like this next year?

26 comments:

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

Glad you got some great feedback!

Akoss said...

I also submitted my query and felt the same way you did. But in the end it was worth it. Write-on-con is great for people like myself who can't afford a real life conference.

Tiana Smith said...

Love WOC! :)

Tiana Smith said...

Also, I just read your response to my comment on your last post - send it my way :)

Connie Keller said...

I'm glad it went so well. (Though I wish an agent had requested it.) I hope you start querying soon. It looks like you're in great shape

Kittie Howard said...

Hmm, I'm hoping from the comment above, you're in the chute to get an agent. But, all in all, it seems like you got some super feedback and are ready to roll forward. Thanks for sharing. I really learned a lot.

Sophia Chang said...

Wow that Con just flew by...kind of like Camp Nano for me right now... :P

Tricia J. O'Brien said...

I love the premise of your pumpkin patch book and hope you shop it soon. It sounds so fun.
Every year I attend WriteOnCon and find it fantastic. So much inspiration and so many people willing to lend a hand.

Cynthia said...

So glad you had a good experience with WriteOnCon!

Talli Roland said...

Sounds like you had a great time! I haven't participated since I don't write YA, but I've heard many good things about it.

Louise Bates said...

Sounds fantastic! I didn't participate this year, but I hope to be able to do so next year. Maybe someday a real-life conference will be in the realm of possibility!

Colin Smith said...

WOC was great this year, and I'm glad you had such a good experience, Julie! :)

Nick Wilford said...

Sounds like you benefitted and learnt a lot from taking part. That's awesome!

Jay Noel said...

It was very brave of you to step outside your comfort zone like that. But how else can you grow?

So happy that you were able to get some good feedback.

David Macaulay said...

Interesting post. It's amazing how quickly the whole writing and publishing worls changes but the eternal search for an agent seems like a constant thing. Good luck.

David

http://britsintheus23.blogspot.com/

Medeia Sharif said...

I'm glad you got a lot out of it. I'm going to have to head over to the blog soon since I didn't participate.

Theresa Milstein said...

How nice that you got good feedback. I put up my query + words. The query is much stronger as a result. My 5 pages wasn't too helpful because most people didn't get that I was writing in 3rd person omniscient. I think people are harder on first pages on forums like that. But my 250 words are sparkling thanks to the forums + a critique I won from Gennifer Albin during her WriteOnCon workshop.

Donna Hole said...

A positive attitude about the experience is a great take away. Seems like you got a lot of varied feedback, and you know how to sift through a use what you can. That's important in getting a good query out there.

Congrats on the Entangled crit. I've heard lots of good things about Entanged.

.......dhole

Kristin Rae said...

That's great you learned so much and have a stronger query because of it! I didn't participate... it sounded too stressful, especially since I did go to an in person conference this year and it nearly killed me LOL. BUT I plan to do Deana Barnhart's Gearing up to get an Agent in September. *bites nails*

Nicole said...

Neat recap! I definitely need to dive in on this one next year.

Jay Noel said...

Is getting an agent at the top of your priority list? Or a publisher first?

Stina Lindenblatt said...

It was nerve wreaking posting, wasn't it? I had a lot of mixed feedback on what people wanted tweaked in my query. One person told me I focused on the wrong thing. Huh? She's never read the book. How would she know what to focus on? I ignored her advice. :)

It could be none of the ninjas or agents saw you query or pages. Things kept moving around like crazy.

Ciara said...

Every year I intend to sign up for this, but each year I fail. I'm glad you received such great feedback.

Margo Berendsen said...

I had a commitment that kept me from WOC, but I do plan to go check out everything little by little the next month or so.

I was so tempted to post my query, but my book isn't ready, so I'm hanging tight - would HATE to get a bite from an agent and then have to admit, uh, my book's not ready yet :(

Rose Munevar said...

It does sound positive for you! I'm not ready for any of that yet, as I prepare for another round of revisions, but someday :) Nice to meet you.

Julie Dao said...

Alex: Thanks, me too! Glad I did it!

Akoss: So true! It's a great alternative to shelling out money to fly to an in-person conference. Glad you posted your query, too, and hope you got good feedback as well!

Tiana: Thanks for looking at my query :D

Connie: I wish an agent had requested it, too! Just got back into querying this week. We'll see what happens :)

Kittie: I've gotten back to querying and I hope something good happens!!

Sophia: Yeah, this SUMMER has been flying by crazy fast. Not cool.

Tricia: The con will definitely become an annual thing for me - loved it. And thanks for your kind comments on PPP. Resumed querying!

Cynthia: Thanks! I really enjoyed it!

Talli: I didn't even notice that it was just for MG and YA... you're right! Maybe someday it'll expand to include other genres as well :)

Louise: Yes, I'd love to do a real-life conference. Planning on at least one next year :)

Colin: Thanks so much for encouraging me to join! Really had a good time.

Nick: I did! It was very worthwhile.

Jay: Yes, I've been stepping out of the comfort zone a lot lately. It's the only way we grow as writers! Thanks!

David: Yep, the search for validation is a forever thing with the writing biz :)

Medeia: There's a lot of good stuff on that blog!

Theresa: Congrats on winning that critique! I didn't put up my first words or pages, but probably should have done so. Glad it helped at least a little, even if people didn't get the gist from the short sample you posted!

Donna: Yeah it was a lot of different comments and helped me get an idea of what multiple people see from one piece of writing. It's all about subjectivity and personal taste... tricky, tricky stuff.

Kristin: Dude, you pitched in PERSON to an agent. You're pretty much invincible to me right now :D Good luck with that agent contest!!!

Nicole: Thanks! I recommend it!

Jay: Finding an agent would be nice! I never thought about going to a publisher directly, but may consider that further down the road :) I know it worked out well for you!

Stina: That is really weird... I learned that you take only the pieces of feedback that resonate with you most. In the end you're the one who knows your story best. You could tweak and tweak and tweak and someone out there will always want an edit. Stick to your guns!!!

Ciara: You should try it next year! I didn't have a lot of time this year, but popped in and out whenever I could.

Margo: Oh yes, that would be horrible! BUT, that being said, I saw someone who posted her query and wrote in bolded letters at the top: "THIS IS A WIP" to let agents know. So you could hook one, and then maybe they'll ask you to submit when the book's ready ;)

Rose: Thank you!! Good luck on your revisions. Maybe you'll have a nice spiffy book to query for next summer's WOC! Nice to meet you :)